There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: · Say what would you do differently than last year · Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year · Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

Item: There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: · Say what would you do differently than last year · Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year · Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.
Rating: 6
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What You'll Find In This Report

The letter effectively communicates the changes planned for the annual work party and addresses the key points from the prompt. However, there are areas for improvement in tone, coherence, and grammatical accuracy. The letter is semi-formal but could benefit from a more consistent and appropriate tone for a work setting. The structure is clear, but the flow could be improved with better cohesive devices. Vocabulary is varied, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity.

Letter Tone: Semi-Formal

Words: 152

Paragraphs: 5

CEFR Level: B2

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Tone & Register Analysis

Informal

Semi-Formal

Formal

Detected Tone: Semi-Formal

Appropriateness: --%

Detailed Metrics

Covers All Points 7.0

Purpose Clear 7.0

Correct Tone 5.0

Word Count 7.0

Logical Flow 6.0

Letter Structure 7.0

Cohesive Devices 5.0

Paragraphing 6.0

Varied Vocab 7.0

Spelling 5.0

Collocations 6.0

Complex Sentences 6.0

Punctuation 6.0

Accuracy 4.0

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Hello Team,

to inform you that next month, the annual work party will be held in the office which will be organized and managed by the company's manager.

to let you know that from the last year's party . This year the party will be held in the indoor hall instead of the outdoor one due to bad weather and also many games, singing and dancing will be performed by the participants who are interested in these activities. Moreover, many cuisines such as Indian, Chinese, and Mexican to all the guests. I hope this party will be a lot of fun!

We are planning to meet in the reception area for the party where everyone can easily gather with their friends.

I look forward to hearing from you.
,
Monika Devi

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